|Reviews for Bronzework Dragon|
| ADSpencer chapter 2 . 5/9/2007
Well, first off, the title drew my attention-how can I not read something called Bronzework Dragon. Anyhow, great job so far. I'd like to see more character development when you pick this story back up. I like your action scenes and the bits of humor-it's fun.
| feeder chapter 2 . 3/14/2007
ok, this is really good. I can't find any obvious mistakes, your grammar is great, your characterisation is generally good, although I did think that Monty could do with more development, because he doesn't really seem to have much of a personality.
But generally this is a good story, and I like the juvenile character of Kuma - it's an original take on a demon, but at the same time it seems fitting.
Keep up the good work.
| Narc chapter 2 . 3/10/2007
I adore Kuma. She's adorable but terrifying, because she's like any other kid, except that her tantrums can kill people. I love how you made the transition from fight scene with a demon to sitting in a house, drinking tea with that same demon in the room. I definitely want to read more of this.