Reviews for Forgotten Left
xxxGoldrusherxxx chapter 2 . 12/14/2010
Since you asked so nicely, I'll try to make this review as balanced as possible;

Firstly, its very good, i like the characterisation. Also it had a strong sense of mundane realism that i liked.

the main issue for me was that at times is seemed too formal, i understand and applaud your attempt at making your rather sad story seem stoic but at times a little emotion would be nice, to create a connection between character and reader. I would like to add that this was less prevalent in chapter 2.
FinalLifeline chapter 2 . 3/8/2009
This is really good! :) I can guess, by the update thing, that you kinda stopped writing this? :/
HumanInfiltrator chapter 2 . 3/17/2007
Bit short and somewhat lacking in emotion. I'm guessing this is a background chapter? Good then.
HumanInfiltrator chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
This is wonderful. Descriptive and laced with just the right amount of tension and hints at deeper meanings.