Reviews for If Only
lisaslife chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Dont know if you remember me-been a while! But I am back to review you again!

I like this, it is easy to read and very clear.
Arcania chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I love this. It describes longing for one who isn't there with a passion rarely felt from words.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
I really like this... the first two stanzas conect so well and the imagery in the last stanza is great
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
A nicely constructed piece; I like the way it incorporates every day objects into a longing of the mind.

Thanks for your last review.

Alan.