|Reviews for UNDER REVISION!|
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 4 . 7/15/2007
At last, the link works!
Tyler Sykes isn't someone I'd want to meet in a dark alley, that's for sure. His past makes sense, in a twisted way. Why would a person with a perfectly normal life decide to become a killer?
Anyway, next chapter review time!
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 3 . 5/7/2007
Woah, long time no update! Glad to see this story back. :)
I especially like the last part about Ian with the metaphors and stuff.
I know how you feel about changing scenes. I do it all the time.
And now I may go back and reread the other chapters!
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| Sercus Kaynine chapter 2 . 3/6/2007
You're welcome. :)
Okay... where to begin...
Well, honestly, I pictured Hailey as a male in the first chapter because you didn't really tell her gender, but I wasn't confused and understood she was a girl. This is really getting interesting with the mysterious "contract" and all.
As for the "police stuff", I'm not an expert either because, well, quite frankly, I'm not a police officer. But if you want to get some ideas you could read some stories about detectives and police work, or maybe do a little research?
That's about all I've got for now. See ya later.
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
This sounds really interesting. What happened to the guy who was telling the story?
It sounds like this is going to be good; I'll keep reading.
Anyway, I'll be patient with piecing things together. I have to do that with my stories a lot, so I can relate.
So far, you're doing pretty good.