Reviews for forbidden love
blackflowers chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
The repeated '[Still] wrapped up in the warmth of you" stuck out nicely for me in particular, I'm not sure why. I really like your work here.
ShyDarkness chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Wow, that was really great. You are still quite talented
mercedes1171 chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
This poem was perfect. Crazy, how many people out there are so talented, yet they aren't professionals. Beautiful. Keep writing! This poem made me feel good inside to know that they love each other that much!