|Reviews for Heart Assault|
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
You make my heart halt
(I believe that is considered assault)
I believe that those are some of the best lines I have ever read on here. Keep up the good work.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
Ah ha. We have a song! Really nice job.
ARG. FictionPress isn't sending emails again. *beats up FictionPress Web Monkey* It DRIVES ME NUTS.
(Did I mention it drives me nuts?)
Anyhow, lovely song.
| TylerB chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
I loved the rhyme scheme here! It's very original (and heart felt) the chorus is great (if not slightly overused) but I really dug this song/poem. It's a really good read! One more complaint though, all the lines on all the verses rhyme except the last two of the first stanze, thought that was odd. But I really liked this one! Keep writing!
| Just Lies-You Know WHo U Are chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Awe, this was so cute and kinda sad. I loved it. Very well written.