Reviews for Isolation
SAK00 chapter 36 . 8/28/2014
This is a heart wrenching but quite realistic story. Illustrates the cruelty of the world. Tears stepped out at my eyes as I thought of all the children, innocent and others not-so-innocent (like Sacha) die so much. Though there were some grammatical mistakes and the descriptions weren't always vividly bright, I was carried to the very end and am now left with a bittersweet taste. Extremely well done, thank you!
XxChronophobia chapter 36 . 4/3/2014
You've had me from the beginning. I read it all in one sitting. Thank you for the great story.
XTaintedDaisies chapter 36 . 12/16/2013
Hily mother of fucklord! I have never in my life read something as unique as this. I dont usually read all the chapters of a fiction but this really freakin had my full attention. Youre an awesome writer this is probably the cleverest story ive read! Sacha was my fav by far even though he confused me hahaha aw their kiss was weirdly cute
Glamour Addict chapter 36 . 10/26/2012
Well done! This has successfully scared me for life!
Kazu'sTsundere21 chapter 36 . 7/31/2012
Woah, that was intense. But all in all, a great story! Wish i could write like that :\
Noellesco chapter 11 . 10/29/2010
"No far he had had no luck." - Don't you mean, 'SO far...'?
Noellesco chapter 9 . 10/29/2010
"... cut off from civilisation where are murder had just taken place." - The 'are' must have been a typo. XD

From this chapter, I half expected Kate to be aggressive and say: "Well, if there's a murderer in the school, wouldn't that make it YOU guys if you slit my throat now?" Honestly, she's too easy to threaten for my taste. :P
Noellesco chapter 7 . 10/29/2010
"Little idiot must have got lost last night." - It should be 'gotten'.
Noellesco chapter 6 . 10/29/2010
"Kate pushed ran out into the corridor." - I'm just pointing out a mistake. You had some other minor mistakes, including missing commas and such, but this one glared out at me.
OutOfSync947 chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
This is really good so far. I like your varied vocabulary.
XxXMusicSavesMySoulXxX chapter 36 . 3/1/2010
I LOVED reading your story. It's so good! The ending is pretty depressing though. How everyone died and all..But it was still an AWESOME story and I loved it, and it was long.
Smidojuice chapter 36 . 12/9/2007
bahaha amazing.

hot guy shoulda lived though.

did he like her or what? or was he just fucking insane? its hard to tell the difference sometimes.
givelifeyurall chapter 35 . 11/4/2007
hm this reminds me of battle royale or of a picture of a little girl with a smile on her face and blood dripping down.
Experiment 156-SKYE chapter 35 . 7/1/2007
i liked this alot. But...very depressing ending.
J.R. Miller chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
This story had it's fair share of occasional spelling and grammatical errors, but other than that it was a great story! I especially loved the ending, with the whole part about life being a game. I really enjoyed the story and hope to see more work from you in the future!
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