|Reviews for A Tale of Ever After|
| Sine Die chapter 4 . 4/20/2007
I seriously enjoy this story so far. I really hope you update soon. The characters are amazing. I like how they have faults and aren't made prefect. Your style is great too.
| MyNameIsMad chapter 2 . 3/26/2007
Another good chapter. You do a fine job explaining everyone's character. It sounds like a happy little family! One with a few problems, of course, but happy nonetheless!
One note: can sugar actually serve as windows? It would melt in the heat and dissolve in the rain! There may be something that I'm not getting but it didn't sound realistic...in context, obviously. This IS fantasy, after all. :)
Keep up the good work!
| MyNameIsMad chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
I like it! Great narrative voice. Your description is very good, and your grammar is near-flawless. There were one or two sentences that needed to be reworked, but aside from that, it was immaculate! Well done on integrating the world's history in the form of a history book. You didn't overburden your reader with loads of random information. So, good job and keep up the good work!