|Reviews for Apple|
| radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Beautifully Done! I am going to add this to my C2!
| Grayhome chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
It's a bit blatant at times, but the rhythm is very well-established. Also, I think you need to cut out two syllables from "Into your open arms I will willingly run."
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
I love this. The rhyming and rhythm works very well. Great job!