Reviews for La Vie En Rose
Yuaekito chapter 6 . 4/16/2007
Review for chapter 6:

i loved it... why did you have to make me cry?
Yuaekito chapter 5 . 4/16/2007
review for chapter 5:


Skeptic-Critic chapter 8 . 4/16/2007
Now I really like Max...And now I'm almost positive she'll end up with him too...At leasst, i hope that's where this is going...He grows on you really quickly...Jerk he may be, but you can't help but love him...
swimchickslam chapter 8 . 4/16/2007
Haha scooby doo (:
claveldelpoeta chapter 8 . 4/16/2007
Max is soo hot... notice the numerous t's... Chip is so not cool... LoL... Max is better and hasa sexier name... LoL... I feel high... sorry... update soon please!
Yuaekito chapter 4 . 4/16/2007
Wow... its sorta like those K dramas... very funny and the girl is always hitting her head on something... Poor Sabrina... hehe... anyways i liked Max, he was a jerk though... i love jerks more then Charmers and Chips name is suitably annoying ... no offence... i'm not really good at giving reviews and i only read upto this chapter...

Ok ... bye for now... if this isn't finished yet pleaase update... i think i will finish reading this tomoror... _

your writings are fun to read *makes peace sign with fingers*
jammi chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Yeah, I just watched Degrassi seasons five and six [do not ask, the things I will do to avoid studying, it was throwback to elementary school days since I stopped watching that show in grade ten] anyhoo, one of my favourite characters died, and I had to go back and read that 'Prince Charming' Chapter with Slipped Away by Avril Lavigne playing in the background. Say what you will about her but she has some good tearjerker songs.

This part gets me everytime, I actually cried this time:

"It took three months before I could hold anything down. Four months before I could smile again. Five months before I stopped crying every day. Six months before I stopped crying myself to sleep every night. Eight months before I stopped wishing I had died with him. It took me a year before I didn’t think about him every day and a year and two months before I could finally say my goodbye."

But yeah, I thought I should drop you a line again because I think it takes a lot of skill to be able to write both comedy and something that touches the heart. And can I put that in my profile? It won't make a lot of sense without the rest of the chapter but I love it.

Update soon )
HollyRushdy chapter 7 . 4/5/2007
Gigi's new member? How can you rent that and NOT think it's porn? I have been laughing my ass off in here! My favorite part ever:

“I would never picture him naked!” Okay, well I would never admit to having pictured him naked. Or scantily clad in tight, pirate like pants and an open flowing shirt like blousy thing. And I definitely would never have picture him in nothing but an apron while doing the dishes. Or walking around in cowboy pants and –

And also:

Here was the moment he looked at me and said I was on candid camera.

Need I say more? :D
Leaving Fictionpress chapter 7 . 4/5/2007
A little cliche, but fun. The French at the very end of the author's note is wrong, though - It should be "Au revoir et bonne nuit," not "Au revoir est bonne nuit." Sorry about the nitpickiness, I just get a little fanatical about French sometimes.
swimchickslam chapter 7 . 4/4/2007
Oh dear.

Chip is a bad egg!

but a very hot one..


I hope you update soon dear!
Skeptic-Critic chapter 7 . 4/4/2007
you almost made me start tearing up again when you started talking about his other girlfriend...But then i managed to read fast enough to see that he didnt' really feel for her anymore...although two weeks is a lot of time...Especially with max around, eh? Sorry...Max is kinda growing on me now...Especially with the whole Chip/girlfriend thing...Even if he doesn't have feelings for her...Max is certainly growinig on me... chapter 7 . 4/3/2007
hahhaha; me and sabrina have a very common flawy... we always do things that we KNOW are bad for us... m, hahha, update soon please!
Hannah56 chapter 7 . 4/3/2007
I gotta say, I really, really, love this story. Im actually surprised you dont have more reviews. Its one of the better written, and more complex stories on here. Definitely one of my favorites.

Please update soon. I cant wait to see how everything unfolds. Why is Max so hostile towards her? What are Chip's real motives? Is he hiding something more, or is he what he appears to be?

And I love Sabrina, and her friends. ANd her flipping off whats her name was absolutely wonderful!
pinkshades chapter 6 . 4/1/2007
Aww, I liked this chapter a lot. It gives more dimension and backstory to Sabrina... It makes me want an Andrew! (Minus the dying part, of course.) _ chapter 6 . 3/31/2007
aw really good way to end the chapter! keep it up, please
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