Reviews for La Vie En Rose
Skeptic-Critic chapter 6 . 3/27/2007
Ack! That made me tear up...which is not a terribly good thing to have happen when you're sitting in the middle of the computer lab at school...I think I've had about four or five different people asking me if someone died...I just told them I had allergies since I can't really tell them that the one who died is really a fictional character in a story I'm reading...

It's so sad...Here I was thinking I'm going to be mad about Chip or something and instead I find myself tearing up about a dead fiance...Please more happiness? I cry too easily...
rocky19 chapter 5 . 3/27/2007
was not expecting that one
jammi chapter 6 . 3/26/2007
I really really really really fangirl moment here, REALLY liked that part. It wasn't so much that it yanked us out of the fact that this is a humourous story but it seems like the sort of thing you would hear when someone is talking about a part of their past for real, that last paragraph where she gives the months it took her to deal, broke my heart. It makes her seem more real, adds depth to her I guess. I can't really explain why I liked it so much but I did.

Man, seriously I loved that little snippet from her past. of course, I was listening to 'How do I breathe' by Mario while reading it. Pure coincidence.

"How do I breathe

Without you here by my side

How will I see

when Your love brought me to the light

Where do I go

When your hearts where I lay my head

When your not with me

How do I breathe

How do I breathe"
serako chapter 5 . 3/19/2007
well, the ending was quite a surprise. out of all the things i expected him to say, that was not it. so kudos to you on that! if i had one criticism it would be that sabrina and chip seem to be moving rather fast. but anyways, update soon!
pinkshades chapter 5 . 3/17/2007
Hey hon! Sorry this review was so late... I read your chapter when you updated and I thought I reviewed already but I didnt! Aw.. Chip. If I didn't love Chip so much, I'd want to kill him for Sabrina's sake.

Great chappy and my only question is about Max. Why is he suddenly interested in Sabrina (or at least, so soon?) Ie. in CH4 when he asked her to kiss her and in this chappy with the sighing thing... It's probably just me, but I thought that was a little out of character since a) they just met and b) Max and Chip are best friends and Max knows Sabrina's with Chip.
Skeptic-Critic chapter 5 . 3/16/2007
Please tell me this is the part where he tells her she's his girlfriend...Please...He's just so sweet...And while I sorta have a feeling she might end up with Max...I dunno...I just think Chip's so sweet...And cute...And thoughtful...And...Don't ruin the knight please...Pretty please...with sugar on top?
brittle.star chapter 5 . 3/16/2007
FREAKING ASSHOLE! I'LL KICK HIS ASS! hahaha, he's such a bitchin hoe :) update son
brittle.star chapter 2 . 3/16/2007
lmao; my name's sabrina, and I got my name because my mother loves audrey hepburn. i also have a gorgeous older sister... this is quite odd to read :P
insane in the brain chapter 5 . 3/15/2007
WHAT? Oh, best twist I've read all month, which isn't a lot but beats the crap out of my war poetic texts for English class -.-
givelifeyurall chapter 5 . 3/15/2007
aw man...everything was going great till that stupid sentance came...damn
jammi chapter 5 . 3/15/2007
Well damn. i think I would've prefered if he said something like, 'I think dancing in women's undies is great foreplay, in fact I'm wearing a pair right now *waggles eyebrows* awkward but no where near as bad as what he actually said. No wonder Max was peeved. I wonder if he thought she knew.

STAY AWAY FROM HIM SABRINA. Just LEAVE! No matter what his excuse is, just roll bounce your self out of there, lol. And they kissed and everything. Why must the guy who makes her come outof her shell, well sort of, have a woman. Le sigh.

Oh, and I like that you didn't make us 'follow' along on the date, instead let us know about it when she was talking to her friends.
ALY55A chapter 5 . 3/15/2007
Ahh why have I been missing all these updates? Sorry! But now I'm all caught up. Anyway, the Chip/Sabrina pairing is still very cute... except for the fact that he has a girlfriend! Uh oh! Can't wait to see her reaction in the next chapter. I also wonder how Max fits into all this? Can't wait to find out.. Anyway, update soon!
Fairytale Gurl chapter 4 . 3/14/2007
okay. i have 5 words

i wish i was sabrina

HJAHAHAHA omg she is so amazingly lucky i mean besides the whole kultzy thing but they always lead to like wonderful things

so is she going to end up with chip or max? omg i like them both!

update son please
Skeptic-Critic chapter 4 . 3/11/2007
Run for the money is definetly fun and interesting...But I still want her to end up with Chip...His name is cooler...I'm not even going to start my rambling...It's already 4 in the morning...Rambling now me talking forever...
Skeptic-Critic chapter 3 . 3/11/2007
Ok so I've officially labeled myself as an airhead...In case you were wondering...Which I'm sure you weren't...Unless you really have no life...But no one could possibly have a lack of life like that...Which makes you sound like you're talking about a dead person...

Anyway, the reason I'm an airhead is because I initially read this chapter ages ago and for some reason didn't review...And I can't quite remember why not...I'm sure I wrote myself a note somewhere...I do that alot...It'd work too if I didn't always lose the notes...Or forget them...Or what they mean...or sometimes I'll put a note in my pocket so I can't forget about it...Then all day I just sit there thinking "oh yeah that's the note" and completely forget to read it and do whatever it was on the note...

Right so onto the actual chapter...Although first I really wanted to ask if you even want me to review for your stories...If you don't that's alright...I can go back to being one of those annoying stalkeresque readers who just read the story and never tell you what they think...Just say the word...Although which word you're supposed to say I could never figure out...

Right now seriously onto the real chapter...Um...It's terribly funny...Umm...I don't think I can really say anything without sounding like a broken record so...I guess that's really all I have to say...
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