Reviews for Lost Trust
antigonelives chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
Good poem! Of course, if you'd like me to be constructive, try experimenting with your form. Try imagery, detail, little things like alliteration, metre, and the like. Don't be afraid to experiment.
Things unsaid chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
This is good,I can understand what you went / going through.