Reviews for Depression
AeonEye chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I know the feeling all too well. You write some incredible Haiku's.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Wow. That really does describe depression to a tee. God, I feel depressed just reading it. It's cold & bare & it's just sad. Man. Good job. Keep writing! :)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
god didnt curse you

genetics did

i am not sure that will make sense in general

but it might if you were looking at the same distorted add at the top of the screen

vodka blur sunrises

remind me of pictures of communist storm troopers

which in turn makes me think of starwars
JR Gringo chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Hey Moondoggy! Such vibrant imagery for a depressing topic! the (lack of) capitalization and puncuation suggest a kind of indifference, which also complements the theme. Good haiku.
Basara chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
oh... vodka, well... drinking will work for awhile but it won't keep your trouble unsolved...


now where's my beer... *searching in my frigde* lol...
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Utterly perfect. Captured the hurt and the remedy so well.