Reviews for twin twinkies
Kazuki Mishima chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
I'm not entirely sure what "calorie free" means, but overall this makes me want to eat a pair of Twinkies.
thestonedfox chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
I struggle to find criticism in this- the attempt is futile.

Dear lord, this was beautiful.
surrealphobia chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
The joy of twinkies! I loved the analogy and the part about ribs was different. Great Haiku.
nofaceme chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
very interesting...

thinking about twinkies and ribs makes me feel fat

even though i'm not...

i love ambrosia, good strong words here.

recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
interesting analogy...although i'm not sure what you mean by twinkies (thanks for the feedback)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
I so love your haiku. They're all so fantastically worded. "Vixen loving ribs" is such a great phrase. I love that. Just great. Keep writing! :)
lackluster chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
i'm completely enthralled by this. the words are majestic together, like they were made for each other and the image is mesmerizing. just...lovely.
Basara chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
an oddly funny haiku... hahahaha...

Next Exit chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
awesome! paints a perfect picture