Guess who.

The opening needs a little work, as the dream is a bit cliched, but apart from that it's looking good. I like the characters, but Banil is a little Gary Sue...hasn't got any major flaws, you know? Bit too perfect. Apart from that, you've got the character development down n all. Yay!

My username on FP is not Lilabelle, so don't bother searching it. It was going to be but someone nicked it