omg this endind made me CRY! it was so sad, and i was so rooting for Ayden too! he was my fav :( well i can get why you ended it like that and it was in a sense a good ending just not so much a happy one, but it was good

I'm going to go check out Cadence. This ending was so depressing. Beautiful and depressing. Great story, I loved it.

Hey! I've just started reading and I'm loving this story. It's hilarious. I'm sorry I hadnt come accross this story earlier, otherwise I would have given you support. My freind recomended I read this story. Keep writting, its really good.

Her mom is awful I'd have put my self up ffor adoption a LONG time ago

Oh, the sequel should be cool. And I really did get into the characters, me crying over a death just shows how much I'm into the story, if I miss that character as much as I did with Aydan. A brilliant story and I cant wait for more of yours.

JM

-sobs-

Is there anything else I can say? No, there isn't. The songs you incorporated in this made me cry even more. I love Lostprophets, and I just bought the Anberlin song because I had to hear it. I was crying! Geez.

Anyhow, beautifully written.

Oh wow. That was unbelievably dramatic adn emotional and such an unforseen conclusion. I don't know what to say. It was written absolutely amazingly, however... I can't say that I'm happy, now can I? Aydan's truly dead? No surgery, no doctor's, no fizing him up to make a happy ending? I'm so sad! You actually had my eyes welling up.

Anyhow, well done, you grabbed a ton of emotion from me. I can't wait to read Cadence.

Gah, I'm such a sap, that was lovely, beautiful even, but very very sad, I cant believe that Aydan is gone, I wasnt expecting that at all. I actually shouted No really loudly at my computer that my mum poked her head in the room asking me what was wrong, hehehe. I loved this chapter, even though it was sad and made me cry.

JM

When i first read the chapter from Aydan's point of view, i nearly cried. then i nearly sent you a very abusive review. i decided to wait for this chapter before i did and i am so glad.

despite not liking the plotline and the fact you killed of one of my favourite characters, you wrote this amazingly well and i liked it.

though i'm not sure i can forgive you for killing aydan...

Haeloed ;)

*sobs hysterically* AH! HOW COULD HE DIE? NO!

why?

i like the way you wrote it out and stuff, but still

WHY? :'(

WHAT?

Why? *sob*

You are very evil...

no, how could you do that!

:'[

amazing chapter, i just wish he didnt have to die

i mean, they didnt even kiss!

written brilliantly hun, loved the story

keep up the awesome work

x

OMG I'm not quite sure what to say, I'm balling my eyes out about this point, so it's pretty hard to type. But that was absolutley beautiful, you had me crying from the first word to the last, and it really touched me, and I felt every emotion, nothign left to sya but brilliant.

*sob*

I'm usually a lazy bugger and don't review. I've read this story all the way through so far but this chapter was written so well that I just had to drop a couple of words by.

Well done.

Rogue.

Hola! You know what the beginning story of this reminded me of... Mrs. Schneekluth the crazy whore hahahaha, and I can kind of imagine you saying the stuff also, if you didn't care about school whatsoever... and I see a little bit of me in Chad, besides the love and expulsion part and of course the car part (and the two schools part), ya know the red eyes everyone tells me that I'm stoned, slouching/sleeping in class all the time, black hair (but I hope it isn't long)... haha anyways good first chapter, I told you once that I didn't like reading in the first person but I think this story could only work in the first person and I like it :D! Wonder if you put Quinn in your little story and sharing a whole buffet with us . or HAHAHA I would definitely get more kicks out of this story.