|Reviews for Spring|
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This will go in my favorites! It was so easy to see it all in front of me! Your rhyming was good as usual, but what I also liked was your adjectives in the end...or are they called metaphores? I don't know...but it was really good! Keep at it and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| RuchiraMandal chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
The whole poem is beuwtifuuly written, but I absolutely love the first, 2nd and last stanzas. btw, I had read it at the cybercafe on Sunday, but had logged out, so couldn't review. How come you said you couldn't write poetry?
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
I like this. The imagery was beautiful and well captured. My only suggestion is wording this part a little differently "“Earth, awake!” she does sing, “for it is now Spring!" because it sounded a bit awkward as I read it with the rest of the poem.
Great job, keep it up!
Thanks for the review!