Reviews for Contemplation
hey maria chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
It's a very intriguing poem. It's ambiguous in a good way, it lets me make my own conclusions about its meaning. I liked the last three lines especially. But I'm not sure about the second line, where you wrote "as you think." It sort of brings another element into the poem, makes me feel like it's addressed to someone who doubted you? Or misjudged you? But that idea isn't explored any further in the rest of the poem so it feels incomplete in that aspect. Sorry, I'm nit-picking. But on the whole I liked this poem, so nice job. :)