Reviews for A Quick Bite |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I think I'm about to cry. These two chapters were so heart touching and amazingly written. I can't believe her parents are being so mean. They did after all lexture her about them wanting her to have a boyfriend. Alejandro isn't even her boyfriend! But anywho, at least Lexie will be safe with Alejandro. That is where she's going right? Update soon. This is a great chapter and I love this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Parents are so evil! I mean really, forbiding an 18 year old from doing something as long as they live under their roof...well that backfires when they havee somewhere else they could live and all that...err...I hate Dracula! I thought he was there to kill her family and changed his mind last second because she was there. I mean this is just what I think a crazy vampire would do so I suppose you can ignore me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful set of chapters! Chapter 17 advanced Lexie and Alejandro's relationship, but not too far. Chapter 18 played up a more serious, heavyhearted side of the story. Both we're fantastic :) Update soon! ~carM~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! The tension is killing me. I just want them to admit they love each other... RAWR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are an amazing writer. You paint the picture of the story so clearly that I can visualize it happening as if it were a movie. I love your sarcasm. I was laughing so hard I'm sure if I had been drinking milk it would have come out of my nose. Al is so sweet. I love when he had the murderous look in his eyes when he saw her on her date with Ralf. When they kissed I could feel the passion between them as I read it. This is a truly inspiring story. Keep up the amazing work and update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapters! I'm glad Ralf is dead. Alejandro is so HOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A date! YES! Hehe. Well, I really really really enjoyed these two chapters. It really moved the characters along in their relationships with each other. I can't wait for more :) ~carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has been very intersting and i enjoy reading it. i can't wait to read the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! A date! Well this will be interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I WANT TO KILL RALF! RAWR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story so far... please have Alejandro swoop in and save her... and please continue :D Seriously though, this is a fantastic story with a great plot so far and a fabulous writing style. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOA! Oh my gosh, you have to keep going! MAJOR cliffhanger here! Oh the two chapters were really good, by the way. But still-UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy socks! Ralf shot her? Bloody git. Wonderful chapter, though! Please update as soon as humanly possible :) ~carm~ Champagne and blood? M. I mean, ew. HEEHEE! I laughed so hard at that part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Ralf has gone insane! Awesome chapters. Can't wait for the next ones! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another perfect chapter! Completely fabulous. Come um' coming please! |