|Reviews for A Quick Bite|
| Nadine J chapter 27 . 6/14/2008
I love the story.
I love the grammar.
I love the twists.
I love the ending.
but most of all, I love Alejandro!
| Ravina chapter 27 . 6/6/2008
You are an amazing author, and this is an amazing story!
I enjoyed reading A Quick Bite, and am looking forward to Love Bites!
Good luck and thank you for a great read!
| Randall K chapter 8 . 6/1/2008
I love your story!
| emilybh chapter 27 . 5/15/2008
I really like it :D
| Kitsye chapter 27 . 5/12/2008
A great story; it had me turning the pages all the way through. One tiny detail I feel I need to mention is that you wrote nothing about Thea in the last chapter. Did she survive? Did Lexie get in touch with her to see how she was doing?
Other than that, I've got to say I loved reading this. Keep writing :)
| AChiMiDice chapter 27 . 5/12/2008
Wow, this story is amazing! :) I really like your writing style. You selected some really great quotes to begin your chapters, and I think the journal entries were a great way for us to understand the characters even better. I can't believe there are so (relatively) few reviews. This story is deserving of 10!
| DesireTheNight chapter 27 . 5/10/2008
This is by far the best page turning story about vampires i have ever read! i laughed, cried, screamed and everything with it! it was utterly amazing! i think you should write a sequel! Im sad to see its over.
| DELETED ACCOUNT 10212019 chapter 27 . 5/10/2008
This is a very good vampire story. There's a good blend of action and romance (I don't really like stories with too much of either) and I especially love your characters. Alejandro can just be so sweet and sad, and Lexie's fiery personality is just wonderful. Good job.
| anitsirK chapter 27 . 5/1/2008
I am literally speechless. O.O
That was awesome! When I say I'm speechless in other reviews I've written, it wasn't always completely true. Well, it was true but only because sometimes the only thing I could say was "Fantatastic! Great! Wonderful!". Or something along those lines. So to prevent myself from being too repetitive, I just say I'm speeachless.
But this story, OH MY GO-! I simply love this story! It has really surpassed all the other adjectives I could think of! :) And so, now , I am truly, speechless.
I mean, I've read countless of romance on Fictionpress and at the start, when I was still a newbie, I appreciated the stories greatly. Some weren't really as well written as this one but they entertained me. Then they just became repetitive and monotonous and uniformly alike. Some were tedious to read and they had lots of reviews! (I admit, I do decide whether to read a story first by looking at the number of reviews and the number of chapters compared to that and the length between publishing and last updated...but all comparing them to the number of reviews. It would become quite a lengthy explanation and I am beginning to digress, so I will stop now. Hahahaha...) Most of the stories here just lost their magic.
And this story, it's just simply so much more well thought of than most of the mindlessly, in the spur of the moment, written stories here that i am so grateful that I was able to read it for FREE. My Go-. Most of the stories here couldn't even compare to this one. And I usually read several stories from certain authors that I like before considering them and putting them into my favorites, but you know what? With this single story, you one me over so I am adding you to my Favorite Authors.
I shall start with telling you that the characters were so original! You had great character and relationship development , it was smooth and it just really went with the story. I was pleasantly surprised that Alejandro wasn't the cliched brooding, mysterious, bad-tempered, violent male lead. Because that is usually the case when the male lead is supernatural(i.e. vmmpire, demon, etc.). And Lexie wasn't the cliched sarcastic, can't admit her feelings, bad-tempered(too) female lead. I mean, she was sarcastic and yeah, she couldn't admit her 'love' immediately but she was able to admit that she 'liked' Alejandro. And her sarcasm and can't-admit-her-feeling-ness wasn't annoying like how some female leads become. It was all natural and normal. Unlike the other stories where they just keep bringing it up again and again because there's nothing more to write about.
Anyway, they weren't flat/static characters and for that I praise you! Their relationship and how it escalated was perfect!
The plot was consistent and coherent. It flowed smoothly. And I can really see that you did put a lot of thought into this story. BUT, I am wondering about just two details. You said vampires can see clearly even with just a spec of light, BUT, why did Lexie/you imply that she couldn't see clearly when she was looking for Dracula because the club was 'dimly lighted'? And another one is argh...I forgot...when I remember I'll just e-mail you.
There were some typos, but a scant few so that's no problem. :) It' normal.
Just so you know, this story is definitely my favorite favorite and I do really love your characters!
Keep on writing! And Good luck!
| Belle Morte858 chapter 27 . 4/21/2008
Wow! That was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. I just couldn't stop reading, and I just had to find out what was going to happen next. I love everything about the story; I am also a sucker for a good vampire romance. Anyway, I absolutely loved it and I hope you keep writing.
| ChristianAngel01 chapter 27 . 4/18/2008
Wow! I love A Quick Bite
You have a talent
It was one of the most amazing stories I had ever read
I hope you continue to make more
| Amora Lee chapter 27 . 4/16/2008
That was a really amazing story. I'm going to read the sequel now it was that good.
| Moonlit Promise chapter 27 . 4/2/2008
Oh, this is the part of the story I hate! The end! I wanna cry helplessly because I hate when a good story is over! You should make this a book, you'd make good money.
Oh, I'm so sad it's over... It was really good... Thanks for posting it because I don't know how I lived without ever reading this.
| Moonlit Promise chapter 25 . 4/2/2008
Oh, no! I liked Tom! Well, I liked Jon better, but, yeah.
| Moonlit Promise chapter 24 . 4/2/2008