Reviews for A Quick Bite
Moonlit Promise chapter 23 . 4/2/2008
I wanna know who the spy was. And you said that she slapped him, but she couldn't have because she was still in chains when she did that.
Moonlit Promise chapter 21 . 4/2/2008
Soulmates are so cliche! And I love cliche! And vampires soulmates really cliche and I love it! Everyone has them, well, not everyone, but I will soon because in Chapter 10 of my story I put in how they were soulmates and yada yada. Well, yeah, anyway.

Next Chapter Away! God, I'm such a dork.

~Moonlit Promise
Moonlit Promise chapter 15 . 3/31/2008
Ah, he's so dreamy... I want him... hehe.

~Moonlit Promise
Moonlit Promise chapter 14 . 3/31/2008
I KNEW IT WAS HIM! The thing at the very top... I was wondering who that was then about halfway through I gasped and said, "Ralf"!
Moonlit Promise chapter 13 . 3/31/2008
Oh, no! Poor Dwight!
Moonlit Promise chapter 9 . 3/31/2008
Seduce...Dracula... Wow... Awkward...

Okay, I'm too tired to go to the next chapter.

Next Chapter Away! Tomorrow! Haha! : D

~Moonlit Promise
Moonlit Promise chapter 8 . 3/31/2008
Hehe, I love when she just starts crying and the guys don't really know what to do... It's funny.

Next Chapter Away!

~Moonlit Promise

P.s- I'm so damn tired but this story won't let me sleep it's so good, haha. Maybe after Chapter 9 I'll sleep...
Moonlit Promise chapter 6 . 3/30/2008
Oh. My. Goodness. I laughed so hard at that part where she randomly started crying. I loved how you said, "... while Alejandro just stood there looking awkward. " I laughed so much. I dunno why, really...

Next Chapter Away!

~Moonlit Promise
Moonlit Promise chapter 4 . 3/30/2008
When I first saw Jurassic Park, I had nightmares too! Oh goodness! I kept having nightmares that I was lying down and a T-Rex looked into my window, and another where I rode a nice T-Rex and another only a few years ago where my family and friends all got seperated in this construction site type place and we were being chased by dinosaurs and another just a few weeks ago where me and my best friend were being chase by raptors!


I dream about dinosaurs a lot... And I can't believe I remembered all that... Well, I still remember that dream where I had to swim up the steps of my apartment building to save caged pokemon that were being held captive by an evil witch (I think it was the Wicked Witch Of The West). That was a long time ago...

Anyway, I still love this story, so:

Next Chapter Away!

~Moonlit Promise
TakaShira chapter 2 . 3/17/2008
Her cutting her hair was so believable. It was perfect. I am in awe as not many are that attentive to realistic reactions.
Float a Boat chapter 27 . 3/12/2008
I absolutely adored this story. It was very well written. You portrayed her feelings in a realistic way. I loved the relationship between Lexie and Alejandro. This is definitely going on my favorites.
violet blossom chapter 4 . 2/25/2008
Hi! I've just found this story.. And I luv it! But I couldn't help but picturing Antonio Banderas's Zorro when I think about Alejandro.. XD
Moonlit Promise chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
I started laughing when I realized she was stuck in an elevator with a vampire. I thought it was kinda funny how he said, "I am thirsty." I would've thought vampire after that but if I saw his fangs I would probably think fake-wannabe-vampire, so I dunno if it's really realisitic that she knew what he was right away. But I like the story so i'll read more.
irzomblie chapter 27 . 2/18/2008
I'm not sure how this review thingy works yet. But, I do know how to tell a FANTASTIC story when I read one.

You're writing is amazing and very smooth. The little splashes of humor and sadness made the ending just...bloody amazing.

It was a great pleasure reading your story.

:] keep up the great work.
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
GREAT first chapter. I really enjoyed it, the protagonist was very refreshing.

One thing though, you kept mentioning the fact that she has a sister, but when she called her dad from the elevator you said, "But then, his only daughter was in a potential death situation." That was a bit confusing, but that was the only part.

Once again, great job!
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