Reviews for A Quick Bite
Delicacy of the Mind chapter 5 . 8/30/2007
first: " "No, mi rubia," he said, his voice soft in the darkness,"

second: " "Goodnight, mi rubia," he said, his voice a whisper in the night."

third: "You are unique, mi rubia."

so "that was the second time he'd called me that" isn't really right.

and in a couple places in the past chapters "not to self" i'm guessing means "note to self" but i got what you meant, and i'm sure others did, so i suppose it's okay.

:D i love this story, so far, it really is fantastic!
Cocokitty chapter 27 . 8/22/2007
omg, that was one of the best stories i have ever read!
Bibi.Love chapter 27 . 8/20/2007
wow .. loved this story - it was excelente (probably spelt that wrong, havent had to write it since yr 9) lol

off to read the sequel now }

keep up the fabulous work

A.V.Mackie chapter 27 . 8/8/2007
Wow, just wow...That is a seriously well written and wonderful story, utterly publishable (doubt thats a word but still you get my point!), I loved every moment of it all, but Lexie finally realizing that she loved Alejandro was brilliant, not unexpected, but beautifully written. Amazing work, I hope your other stories are as good, they're next on my to read list.
soaring glass chapter 27 . 8/4/2007
Wow! A wonderful, long, sexy vampire story. I really enjoyed the story-so much that I just kept having to click the button to read the next chapter. I meant to submit reviews along the way, but I simply got too caught up in the story.

I love the characters-Lexie and Alejandro are likable and fun. I like the arguments and the sexual tension that almost overwhelms their early encounters. I like that for once the girl hates being a vampire and hates the man who turned her and hates that she is falling for him when he attacked. It makes it more realistic, more violent, and much darker. And I really liked it that way.

Good job. I look forward to reading other stories by you.
pyrocidal chapter 27 . 8/4/2007
OMG! i love ur story. one of the best ive read. really well written. youve got a great tallent for this stuff.

Well done and keep up all your fantastic work!
in your head chapter 27 . 8/2/2007
I like the story very much. It's nicely written.
the last word 2 chapter 27 . 8/1/2007
C.L.Lauchlan chapter 13 . 8/1/2007
Haha I like the story and I just noticed something that I get a kick out of. The ads at the bottom of my page are for custom fangs, a psychic vampire and then one to eliminate grey hair naturally. Oh that makes me giggle. I like your story too.
Need 'n' Know chapter 27 . 7/30/2007
At least you didn't have 23 chapters to go with it. *laughs sadly* Am I really as paranoid as I sound? I see it... 23s everywhere. Here there... seriously. Explain. Or were they just random dates? I think I should have been paying attention to other dates, too. Like 1's. They're everywhere. :X

I bet Alejandro had 23 diaries, too. And if this took place in 23 days... no wait, who am I kidding...? Hmm... lemme see something more...

Cast: Al, Al, Violet, Mum, Dad, Ben, Abby, Dracula, Jon, Tom, Dwight, Justin, Ralf and six friends, Dr. Thurman, Thea... huh. _ Is that 21? Okay, then nvm. Those are all I remember. Oh wait, oh... nvm, that guy wasn't in this story. Barney, makes 22. I'm tired. Who's the 23 person?

I like the entries at the beginning. Nice touch.

But left me hanging, wondering about the rest of the family. A void, that void.

Well, they're together. I guess that's the all there is to it.

Uh-huh, and I can see why you've called the last title "delicious ambiguity." The idea's up for grabs.

A sequel. It's not finished. x_x

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Thanks for sharing the story! I mean, writing it. Yes, writing it! ;;
Need 'n' Know chapter 26 . 7/30/2007
The other part of me? Alejandro, they're all like that! Soul mates. *looks around* I'm jealous. Jealous, jealous, jealous. Or am I envying? Ooh. Maybe both.

Dream, dream, dream. Yes, it WOULD seem kind of odd to be having the same dreams more than once. Never happened to me before, so I can be saved from Lexie's ending. Phew.

October 23rd! See? I'm not imagining! *shakes Burning Roses* See? Omgosh, see? And look: 3/06/07 - 6/20/07. The only two different letters are the 3 and the 2. And what does that do? It's 23 (in a way)! AHH! I'm not imagining this! *cries* You're doing this on purpose!

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*still counting chars*
Need 'n' Know chapter 25 . 7/30/2007
Damsel in distress, damsel in distress! Twice in, what, less than a week? Damn, Lexie.

Hm, I can feel like Lexie. Thinking we're all murderers. It's wrong, that you've killed somebody, but they were dangerous. Then again, yeah, she DID kill somebody. Like Alejandro. *sighs*

I sometimes feel like I'm spelling Alejandro's name wrong. That came out of nowhere, sorry.

Everything's kinda vague, though. The other characters, I mean. We're mostly centered around Alejandro and Lexie, still...

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Need 'n' Know chapter 24 . 7/30/2007
Out of the shadows? As in the plan? Ah, okay.

Nice, Dracula, dude. Real nice. Sarcasm? I'm not sure. I'm not ready to accept vampires either.

Lol, it'd be funny if his name were Frank and he was the one to say, "Frankly, my dear..." XDD That seems so out of place, too. Of all things to quote, weirdos. I mean Dracula! X_X

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Need 'n' Know chapter 23 . 7/30/2007
There are so many reasons why Alejandro would believe what everybody is telling him.

And the chapter title, it twists my tongue. I'm a bit sensitive, have you noticed?

Lexie hasn't stop lying. She's still lying. You foolish girl, you love him! T_T So atm, she must feel so sad.

Kinda a short chapter. O_o I was a bit oblivious for a bit, lol, until I finished the chapter.

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Need 'n' Know chapter 22 . 7/30/2007
Yes, I wonder the same thing, Lexie. *knocks her on the head* Idiot! Dummy! How do you say "stupid" in all the languages in the world? And Spanish. O...kay... umm... I think I know "shut up," and that's it. U_U

I love that, he's so cute, always calling her something in another language, not just English. It's cute. Cute, cute, cute.

I like cute things. Whatcha gonna do about it? *punches Lexie* Man, think straight! Start a diary, like Violet. She says it helps. And don't have short entries like Dracula.

"It is time?" Whoa, it's August. I remember it being July 13th, that's all... August.

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