Reviews for A Quick Bite
Need 'n' Know chapter 4 . 7/30/2007
Therapists person are called a "shrink"? Well, I wouldn't know that. Don't live in London. Do you? :X I think it should be obvious... ah yes. Obviously.

Dr. Thurman's dialogues were kinda vague. Too emotionless. I don't know. Well, it's not rocket science to figure out that a therapist is most likely someone you've never met. So, yes, I feel cold toward her, too, regardless of her attempt to help Lexie.

"Okay, bite me." Don't we all wish to be able to say that one day?

I anticipate a bit. But then again, since we haven't met any other vampire beside Alejandro, I don't know who's there for Lexie to meet.

Going nowhere, that's it. No idea of what can happen. Except that Lexie is going to have to leave. Sad.

Need 'n' Know chapter 3 . 7/30/2007
Thea is so right. Wtcrap, a bbq fork. O_o That hurts, though. Ouch. I like the entries, lol. Into more than just Lexie's mind.

Thea reminds me of anime girls. Random hair colors. Pink? Oh gosh, she must stand out a lot.

It's not that bad, though. I was kinda scared of Alejandro. (Gosh, no alias for him? Like "Lexie"?) Yes, Mr. Drop-dead Gorgeous. Lol.

She's still sorta in denial. I hope she gets past that soon.

Um, one thing... I can't sense the chemistry between Alejandro and Lexie. Maybe it's just not there yet. I'm not dense, I know that. Gahh... wait, wait, it's there. Lol. Okay.

Need 'n' Know chapter 2 . 7/30/2007
Those... whatcha call it... uhh... quotes, I guess, that you put at the beginning of each other (I'm assuming), nice. I like this one. Makes me want to sing and dance! *lalala*

We have a date, too? I've always loved dates. Oh wait... it's the date of the story timeline whatchacallit. I see.

It's been over a year, wah.

Not much direct contact with the little sister, huh? It'd be so sad when Lexie has to leave, if she has to. I always dread it. I need to shut up.

She just did that? And just left her hair like that?

Yes, don't you hate it when there are too many he said/she saids? You've used it "sparingly." I think that's the right word. Can't find another word.

Need 'n' Know chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Huh, huh, what? Oh. It's a journal. Sorry, I'm a bit dumb... he's pretty old, eh. Aww, one of THOSE. T_T So sad. He's tries so hard, and I commend him for it! Who's Violet? Better be his sister. *grumbles*

Ooh, I like the first sentence after the transition. There it is! Poor Lexie. *pats* Their names are so alike. *starts laughing* O...kay...

I like your style. I've never gotten how people can write like this. Makes me jealous. Lexie talks about her car like it's human. I thought only men do that. *ish thoughtful* :D

I see, so she's still a bit typical. It's funny, since most people would be in total denial and yell out the first thing that comes to their mind. Great. This is one discreet girl.

angel-Janna chapter 27 . 7/15/2007
Ohmigosh. ohmigosh ohmigosh ohmigosh. I think that was one of the most engaging and witty vamopire stories I've ever read! it was funny, original and clever, and a difference to most run of the mill vampire stories. Lexie's not an outcast or misfit- she's a normal eighteen year old and that's what makes her such a wonderful heroine. and Alejandro... que fantastico! Me gusta mucho su caracter y ... bueno! Todo de Alejandro! (by the way, WELL DONE with your use of Spanish- 100% correct!)

Please keep writing, your stories are really engaging.

Janna X
atreyu love chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
i just realized in the first chapter, you said she had a sister named Abby.. then said she was Benjamin's ONLY daughter :( contradicting XD lol
atreyu love chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
m, it sounds interesting :D
Experiment 156-SKYE chapter 27 . 7/1/2007
woo hoo! i love this so much...i cant even explain.

yay happy ending!

i love all the love.
Promethean Cult chapter 27 . 6/27/2007
I adored this story! I've loved the whole vampire story thing for a while now and, so, of course, how could I have not read and loved your story? Anyways, great job! I loved it all the way to the last word.
BluSkye425 chapter 27 . 6/22/2007
This was an absolutely awesome story-definitely the best I've read! I can't even begin to list all the reasons I like it!
BluSkye425 chapter 26 . 6/22/2007
First: aw, and second: It's about time Lexie finally admitted how she feels! And the whole joining of he souls and minds thing was absolutely adorable-wonderful touch!
BluSkye425 chapter 25 . 6/22/2007
"Oh God, I hoped vampires couldn't get AIDS." That's, like, the funniest line EVER, I think. It took Dracula's decapitation to stop my laughter. And Tom! *sigh* I was wondering who Mr. Mole was, but Tom! Superbly written chapter!
BluSkye425 chapter 24 . 6/22/2007
I'm going to state the obvious and say Dracula is totally mad... I mean, I don't think it would matter if his "poster girl" was a freakin puppy-most people would totally start spazzing out. That's my opinion anyways. Great chapter!
BluSkye425 chapter 23 . 6/22/2007
Poor Alejandro. First Lexie doesn't say she loves him, and THEN he thinks she left him! Somebody needs one of those vibrating beds Dean likes so much lol
Lyra Waterflame chapter 27 . 6/21/2007
Yay! Great fic! I read it over the course of three days, and it was so good, I could hardly stop reading! Good job!
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