Reviews for A Quick Bite |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Therapists person are called a "shrink"? Well, I wouldn't know that. Don't live in London. Do you? :X I think it should be obvious... ah yes. Obviously. Dr. Thurman's dialogues were kinda vague. Too emotionless. I don't know. Well, it's not rocket science to figure out that a therapist is most likely someone you've never met. So, yes, I feel cold toward her, too, regardless of her attempt to help Lexie. "Okay, bite me." Don't we all wish to be able to say that one day? I anticipate a bit. But then again, since we haven't met any other vampire beside Alejandro, I don't know who's there for Lexie to meet. Going nowhere, that's it. No idea of what can happen. Except that Lexie is going to have to leave. Sad. NnK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thea is so right. Wtcrap, a bbq fork. O_o That hurts, though. Ouch. I like the entries, lol. Into more than just Lexie's mind. Thea reminds me of anime girls. Random hair colors. Pink? Oh gosh, she must stand out a lot. It's not that bad, though. I was kinda scared of Alejandro. (Gosh, no alias for him? Like "Lexie"?) Yes, Mr. Drop-dead Gorgeous. Lol. She's still sorta in denial. I hope she gets past that soon. Um, one thing... I can't sense the chemistry between Alejandro and Lexie. Maybe it's just not there yet. I'm not dense, I know that. Gahh... wait, wait, it's there. Lol. Okay. NnK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those... whatcha call it... uhh... quotes, I guess, that you put at the beginning of each other (I'm assuming), nice. I like this one. Makes me want to sing and dance! *lalala* We have a date, too? I've always loved dates. Oh wait... it's the date of the story timeline whatchacallit. I see. It's been over a year, wah. Not much direct contact with the little sister, huh? It'd be so sad when Lexie has to leave, if she has to. I always dread it. I need to shut up. She just did that? And just left her hair like that? Yes, don't you hate it when there are too many he said/she saids? You've used it "sparingly." I think that's the right word. Can't find another word. NnK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, huh, what? Oh. It's a journal. Sorry, I'm a bit dumb... he's pretty old, eh. Aww, one of THOSE. T_T So sad. He's tries so hard, and I commend him for it! Who's Violet? Better be his sister. *grumbles* Ooh, I like the first sentence after the transition. There it is! Poor Lexie. *pats* Their names are so alike. *starts laughing* O...kay... I like your style. I've never gotten how people can write like this. Makes me jealous. Lexie talks about her car like it's human. I thought only men do that. *ish thoughtful* :D I see, so she's still a bit typical. It's funny, since most people would be in total denial and yell out the first thing that comes to their mind. Great. This is one discreet girl. NnK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmigosh. ohmigosh ohmigosh ohmigosh. I think that was one of the most engaging and witty vamopire stories I've ever read! it was funny, original and clever, and a difference to most run of the mill vampire stories. Lexie's not an outcast or misfit- she's a normal eighteen year old and that's what makes her such a wonderful heroine. and Alejandro... que fantastico! Me gusta mucho su caracter y ... bueno! Todo de Alejandro! (by the way, WELL DONE with your use of Spanish- 100% correct!) Please keep writing, your stories are really engaging. Janna X |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just realized in the first chapter, you said she had a sister named Abby.. then said she was Benjamin's ONLY daughter :( contradicting XD lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() m, it sounds interesting :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() woo hoo! i love this so much...i cant even explain. yay happy ending! i love all the love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adored this story! I've loved the whole vampire story thing for a while now and, so, of course, how could I have not read and loved your story? Anyways, great job! I loved it all the way to the last word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an absolutely awesome story-definitely the best I've read! I can't even begin to list all the reasons I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First: aw, and second: It's about time Lexie finally admitted how she feels! And the whole joining of he souls and minds thing was absolutely adorable-wonderful touch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Oh God, I hoped vampires couldn't get AIDS." That's, like, the funniest line EVER, I think. It took Dracula's decapitation to stop my laughter. And Tom! *sigh* I was wondering who Mr. Mole was, but Tom! Superbly written chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to state the obvious and say Dracula is totally mad... I mean, I don't think it would matter if his "poster girl" was a freakin puppy-most people would totally start spazzing out. That's my opinion anyways. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Alejandro. First Lexie doesn't say she loves him, and THEN he thinks she left him! Somebody needs one of those vibrating beds Dean likes so much lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Great fic! I read it over the course of three days, and it was so good, I could hardly stop reading! Good job! |