Reviews for The Art of Perfection
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
I love how you insert little things with the brackets in this one. It's like you're whispering things to the reader on the side that no one else is supposed to know.

"Each breath I take

Is a nightmare wake"

-I love this line. Just how it sounds and makes me's just perfect.

Another great song that's headed to my favs list!
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
That was so sad. That is how loves seems to be most of the time.

TylerB chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This is a beautiful, he won't leave your thoughts, poem that I thought was done brilliantly! I love the first and last stanza. The begining and the end of a poem are so important and you seem to nail it every time. And I love the way you continue to say "always last" driving the point home perfectly. Awesome Read!
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Well done! Awesome write. Thanks for your kind review. Write on!
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
first stanza is my fave, & i love the "sun (shine, sunshine)". the format works nicely & i like the idea behind this. On the last line of the first bit though, i think you meant come instead of com? anyway, nicely written. ~Bex xx