Reviews for Minority Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What possesed u to write this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah, I loved it! I feel bad cause I haven't reviewed anything of yours (which is mean) and you're the only one who reviews my story (which is nice :)) Any, you're an awesome writer! Yay to that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was thinking about the ending and i came up with this, don't know if you'll like it not but here goes: '"I must have been desperate holding her so tight. My arms around her, our lust a blight… I know it's wrong, but yet it feels so right"' I don't know, was just toying with the rhyme and this came to me! I like this though becoz i am totally sure that everyone has felt like this at some stage or another, i like the rhyme and the rhythm of the whole piece, well done, its excellent! Finishing old poems, is totally way better than Algebra! Lotsa Love ~AC~ |