Reviews for Rhythm Of The Tides
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
Ooh, that is pretty. For some reason, I keep reading "drifting" as "dancing." I don't know why. Maybe it's because I associate everything with music. Regardless, this is beautiful. Keep writing! :)
Mosaic Stains chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
I guess I feel like your other reviewer, because it left me with an 'Aw! Wow!' feeling. It's the lovely image of mirrors reflecting ripples of water. I also feel as though it's a bit ironic that I should read this after having a dream yesterday of myself standing on a floor which was supposed to be clear white marble, and yet, rippled outwards like when you skip stones with every step I took, as if it were very fragile.

felicia13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Aw. Now, that's nice. Mirrors are, traditionally, things to watch out for. Superstition says seven years of bad luck if you break one and malevolent spirits can be trapped in them. However, here, the mirrors merely serve the purpose of refracting and reflecting the waves. I rather love that.

Nicely written, Neils. (did I spell that right?)