|Reviews for Unrequited|
| Red chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
Wow, I honestly didn't realize until, like, 3/4 into the story that Larry would end up confessing his love for Steph. Seriously, I am so mad at myself for rooting for Steph and Charlie! I didn't realize that this wasnmt their story! :(( HAHA but aw this was really cute. I wish you would've added more after the ending, but I understand why you chose to end the story the way you did, and I honestly think that it gave it a good "effect". Great work! Xx
| rainreverie chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
holy hell. this story was unbelievable. like woah. And it's based off of real life events?! I'm super super jealous (well, not in that you didn't go to prom with Charlie, but with the whole ending with Larry). I mean, that was beyond cute. It was perfect! Do you mind giving a little update on what happened there on after? ;)
| zaini chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
My stomach did a somersault at the end.
Saaaad that you've no intention of giving us anything ahead and that you're off to fifth dimension.
I hope its not because of being plagiarized.
Loved your stories.
| DDF chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
This is really good! (btw, I called it, I so called it! The Larry-liking-her thing, I mean ;)) and I like endings like that, I tend to do them a lot :)
| heal me forever chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
its great to see unrequited love but it HURTS like a BITCH gosh d PAIN ..!
d time larry would have been crushed wen she was crying for charlie nd d same now dat her love is unrequited for charlie all dis sucks ..!
GOOD ONE last part was KILLER even though u made me cry :(
good stuff :) totally love larry :)
| thankyousomuch chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
oh my gosh way to totally mind fuck everyone. this was one of the first things i ever read on fiction press and I'm only just reviewing it now, but you got me totally hooked to everything you've written. you totally let me realize all the good fiction press has and i wanted to thank you. thank you so much for being such a flawless writer and leave me with the fucking biggest cliffhanger ever that makes me want to cry and laugh all at the same time. larry is adorable, and we've all been where stephanie has with the unrequited love, and then you put larry there too and oh my god you're amazing
| InkWitch chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
WHY. WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US? WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY OMG THIS IS SO SADDENINGLY SADDENING I HATE CLIFFHANGERS AND THIS IS A ONESHOT WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU WOMAN WHAT WHY WHY WHY-
Okay. Calm. I'm calm.
BUT WHY? Oh god. I love this story, it's possibly cuteness extravaganza over here but omg whyyyyy would you do this to us?
Brilliant. I hate you.
| Why Do I Need A Name chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
You should write more like right now.
At this exact moment of time
| Naoise chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
That was lovely, and the ending was really good. Thanks for writing it. :)
| reindrops chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
I really thought she'd still end up with Charlie. Ah, the pain of unrequited love. But hey, I'm glad Larry is in love with her. At least, she'll stop thinking that she's not good enough for anyone.
| HPRK08 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Inspired by real events? You must be one lucky girl :D
| Fugly chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Wow, I loved this! Pleasently surprising end. XD
| mikitastic chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
This is my all-time favorite fanfic.
Thank you, "Sally Can Wait", for sharing your fanfic with hopeless romantic girls like me.
Larry is so sweet, and I like it how you left the readers curious whether they did get together or not.
| All Over You chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Oh my word, talk about a cliffhanger! But I love endings like that. The ones that make you use your imagination and come up with your own happy ending for the two. Definitely enjoyed this, thank you for sharing :)
| bubublacz chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Oh my God! I said those words with a smile on my face. Painful for Larry, but it proves to show that boys aren't the only ones confused in love...