Reviews for Melancholy's second name
Megan-TheWriter chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Verra verra good meg. I really like it. I like how it's all "thou, thine, mine, 'twas and 'twixt". Yeah, I'm cool like that. I find some parts though you just tried to make it sound with the hands on the hips thing. It's still really awesome though and I like how it's all like "time sucks, let's live forever!".

And yes, I do realize that's probably not exactly what you meant by all that jazz, but this is ME we're talking about. I interpret things very strangely.

Anyway, I love itt!

a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Wow, pretty amazing. I didn't think anyone wrote like that any more, with "mine life" and "'twill" and that stuff. It's well done, I believe, and quite true. Keep up the good work :)