|Reviews for HATE ME|
| Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
self loathing...sounds familiar! -
i like the first half of it...fave lines:
"these lies I tell to comfort my sorrows
spoken with twisted tongue and broken jaw"
espcially the last line...the only word that comes to mind is beautiful and morbid art. dunno why tho. but i lub it!
| Vesna Kallima chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
| cloudxtears chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
I like this poem. you truely capture the feelings. I also like your word choice. :D good job