Reviews for Bitten: Revised
Out-Spoken-Runaway chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Ahh, I know you don't write anymore but I'm dying to read this story! I love the original but this one has so much more depth it to. I wish you'd come back!
Carmel March chapter 4 . 6/21/2008
Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

RKRBirdgirl chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Keep yup rewriting this story! The first one was very good, but so it the rewriting, just please dont leave a lot out. Its an awesome story! I wonder what happens next in their story!
pinkeclipse chapter 4 . 5/13/2008
are they going to spend time together soon?
ChristianAngel01 chapter 4 . 5/11/2008
well this revised one is funny and I am interested to know what will de different in this one
In.Silence.Sealed chapter 4 . 5/11/2008
i LOVE this story :D please please please keep writing!
ChristianAngel01 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
This is great

Keep up the good work :)
Jevanminx chapter 4 . 5/10/2008
Oh Tobias got a little bit annoyed there didnt he, hahahaha.

Midnight Dove chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
hey, that was really good. i just finnished reading the first version too. please update soon!
Scythia chapter 3 . 4/2/2008
Please write more :) I love it!
Lizzy chapter 3 . 3/22/2008
i luv this story so far i cant wait for sum more chapters!

can u give me sum sugestions for sum stories,please?
K.D chapter 3 . 3/22/2008
This story is Ah-mazing! Please Update SOON!
too light for gravity chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
thank lord you updated

i was gonna go crazy


i must've reread the first story nth times now

atreyu love chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
gonna read the revised version now :)
Bellaria chapter 3 . 2/15/2008
whoo an update *grins* i really like this how you've changed it and haven't completely, if you get what i mean. sorry about your loss, any loss is hard. i'll be waiting for your next update, whenever it comes up
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