Reviews for Love Song on Repeat
DawnInspire chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Wow I can really relate to this one. It was excellent.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I like the comparison of your love life to a song. It's an interesting one, but it fits really well.

One suggestion: I'd change "i give you my heart" to "gave". I think it sounds better, and if you're looking at the past, I think that would be the better word to use.

Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I liked this because of the emotion packed into the words.

I also liked this because of the subject matter, because many people can relate to it.

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Kackex chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This poem was very well done, because it sybolizes the repitition that romance gives us time and time again. You should capitalize you letters I, And you should capitalize after a period or ending point. (.,!,?) Besides that it is very good, so keep writing, would you kindly.
ghghg chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I like this poem for two reasons. One, I can relate, and two its very well written. Nice job
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Good poem very relateable for sure. Peace.
Nicki BluIs chapter 1 . 11/2/2008

First off I wanna note that when I was scrolling through the bajillion poems you have up, this one stuck out becuz of its title. On first glance I thought It said "Love Me on Repeat" and expected a diff type of poem.

But anyways I like the this subject matter. But I dont see anything poetic about it other than the structure. It this was capitalized and written in prose format, the effect would be the same. There are no poetic devices that I can pick out; nothing that about the diction, syntax, imagery etc that highlights or stregthens the theme.

Maybe you could try to work repitition in there as reference to the title...

Hope this helps!

Bubbles :P
lymli chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
it's a simple poem, but it's sad/cute too.
torn pieces chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
I love it _
Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
This poem's nice.I can relate...well not really about me,but someone I know.I told them to give up on that person,but no wouldn't listen,and kept on getting hurt. So sad! Your poem totally describes those feelings!
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Really good I bet lots of people can relate to this, keep writing!

XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
This one is my favorit so far! Reminds me of something I went through and still kinda am. Nice Job!

Kristie Marie
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I like the use of a love song and the idea of it being stuck on repeat. I know I dont listening to love sings over and over again, gets nausiating after a while hehe!

Needa S chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
I loved the way you summed this up. Awesome write.
The Sweetest Oblivion chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
aww i really loved this. i can totally relate. nice job.
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