|Reviews for All There Is|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
it tells it like it is, and i'm sure a lot of people can relate. good honesty and emotion in this.
| lymli chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
it's always hard to put together the feelings, it's a heartfelt poem.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I've felt this way also. Peace.
| Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
A lot of us have been there.
| XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Wow. This reminds me so much of what my friend id going through its scary.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Feels a little incomplete, but great work anyway. All your poems are sad that i've read so far. Hopefully I see one thats positive :D(Nothing wrong with the others tho _)
| Blissfully Sarcastic chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
This poem is amazing.
I /loved/ it.
| GothicSpook chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Very powerful emotions. Again can relate to a relationship I was in that ended badly.
I love the simplicity of the words yet they have a powerful nature.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
I've been through this before and it isn't fun. Awesome job expressing ones feelings. Keep writing and God Bless.
| Oringinal Lolly chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
*tear* this poem is so beautiful! i feel... so many things! when i read it it takes me to that place, where everything is confusion and pain!
i can totaly relate to EVERYTHING you said here! so much pain and thought and feeling went into this poem, its simply WONDERFULL!
| THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Loved this...reminded me of the importance of the ability to put things into perspective...and make sense out it all so one can move on! A wonderful gift!
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
This is really beautiful. I know it's about love, but I can also relate to it with a friend I had to let go off several months ago :-) I'm sorry for not reviewing for so long, I haven't been on Fictionpress that much (as you can see I haven't posted anything in a while either). But I do have you on authers alert, and I have been reading all your pieces when you post them, I just didn't really have the time to review. I always thought: Ooh, I'll review tonight or tomorrow, and then I forgot :P Soo, anyway. Great piece, as have all your other pieces have been lately, and I can't wait till you post again!
| Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Sorry I havn't been reviewing.. or posting. It is really hard with teachers breathing down your neck.
Anyway, I liked this. Very heartfelt.
| Kusje chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
A sorrowful image of how love can be full of such strife and uncertainty.
Great work :)
And I'm sorry that I don't you have on author alert! I will put you on now.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Sorry for how long it takes me to review, and thanks for reviewing me as much as you do. It's nice to have someone to. lol.
Anyway, love and relationships can really suck sometimes, can't they? It's hard when you care about someone who's personality just clashes with yours or something like that. I've had my own problems and it's always nice to read something that I can relate to. Good job as always.