This is so beautiful, and so bittersweet and sad. I feel so sorry for the poor girl. (

It has a great flow, and the last line pretty much broke my heart.

Fan-flipping-tastic. I loved it, I adored it. Not only was it well written and I could feel the feelings behind it the whole time, but this poem is exactly how I feel right now about someone. I think alot of people will be able to empathize with this. I know I did.

I was so caught up in it that the transition from just fun to falling in love...it just flowed. Very nice

This was WOW. at first i thought every girl might say that but they don't mean it. It was passionate and hot, it is definetly a romance poem!