|Reviews for Sixteen|
| moongazer7 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
This is unique in it’s own way, and I like it.
| seventhchords chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Though this isn't exactly the best piece I've read in terms of technicality, I really like the message you've brought out with this; that we shouldn't allow our insecurities to prevent us from being who we really are. Nice work with this.
Oh, and I do find your pen name rather interesting as well, haha.
| beyond.that.horizon chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
read your own story while listening to gabe bondoc's hairclip.
i swear it'll make you want to cry.
| Formerly chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
The first paragraph of this may well be the most unintentionally hilarious thing I've ever read, and I've read many. But don't take it to heart-I tend to say that pretty much every time I come across something so absurd. It's probably not even in the top ten most unintentionally hilarious things I've ever read.
| Samana chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
wow. you continue to awe me. your prose is very well developed. a suggestion. sometimes storys are more attravtive when they are written in first person, but i think that would chnage the feel to much. this is awesome but is it really an essay? oh yeah whatever happen to BH? anywho great job keep it up.
| leen02x chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Overall, I liked your story, even though your character is a little bit one-dimensional. She seems like a stereotypical understood teen, so she didn't feel very realistic to me.
However, I liked the first paragraph a lot, and the rest of your story has a good feeling to it. Cute.