Reviews for Sixteen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is unique in it’s own way, and I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Though this isn't exactly the best piece I've read in terms of technicality, I really like the message you've brought out with this; that we shouldn't allow our insecurities to prevent us from being who we really are. Nice work with this. Oh, and I do find your pen name rather interesting as well, haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it. read your own story while listening to gabe bondoc's hairclip. i swear it'll make you want to cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first paragraph of this may well be the most unintentionally hilarious thing I've ever read, and I've read many. But don't take it to heart-I tend to say that pretty much every time I come across something so absurd. It's probably not even in the top ten most unintentionally hilarious things I've ever read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. you continue to awe me. your prose is very well developed. a suggestion. sometimes storys are more attravtive when they are written in first person, but i think that would chnage the feel to much. this is awesome but is it really an essay? oh yeah whatever happen to BH? anywho great job keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, I liked your story, even though your character is a little bit one-dimensional. She seems like a stereotypical understood teen, so she didn't feel very realistic to me. However, I liked the first paragraph a lot, and the rest of your story has a good feeling to it. Cute. |