Reviews for Sticky Note Hearts
herpius derpius7 chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Wow, this was amazing!

I really liked the lines:

"And mine got soggy / When we left it in the rain / (my tears didn’t help keep it dry)."

I liked the whole meaning behind sticky note hearts. That was nice.
SirScott chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
That's an interesting thing to do to make hearts out of paper and pin them to your chest.

I always liked sticky notes, except I would forget where I stuck them and they never did me any good.

SirScott
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I really like this.

I love "And mine got soggy/ When we left it in the rain"

Nice job!

I WILL update...after Spring Break. (I'm going away) I promise.

Rowan.
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I like this; the language is pretty and it reads like it means something. The downside is that, after reading it a few times, I'm still not sure what it means-and that could be either my stupidity or your poem's ambiguity. You said yourself that it's confusing unless you know the situation, so I'm going to go with the second one.

Advice: make it speak to everyone. Write for yourself, of course, but consider your audience. Unless you don't care if your audience understands, in which case-just write for yourself.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I love the non-sensicallity (sp?) of

"And mine got soggy

When we left it in the rain

(my tears didn’t help keep it dry)"

Nice metaphors here, good job!

Hazellin