Reviews for Flying Blind The War Jacket
Nemonus chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Good poem against war. Your strange rearrangings of some words are cool. Watch that the rhythm works, though, especially in the middle of stanzas.

"Or how many peaople he was dear to?"
treeshakers chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
dude this is so pretty!

well done