|Reviews for screw|
| il-mio-libro chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
(im on lj)
i got the quote too! yay for being well-read!
it's great to see this finished because i've seen bits of it over the past few months in your sn P
"a hopeless end to a dear and dead exchange"
| teh meh chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
undressing to impress as his eyes scar her skin
fave line! look i'm reviewing!
and i assume then you agree that we should use more quotes...
| Christybell chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I IS REVIEWING
"they’re dancing with contrived desire and sweating sin"
This is fabulous, like always... you just seem to get better and better -
and oh, I noticed the 1984 quote! Go me!
| forty-two dreams chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Exquisite as always, Iris. Keep being you, pretty please?
| beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Great poetry. Really beautiful. I'm usually a jerk in reviews, but this really was great. Best line: "(fiction replaces trust)".
Criticism: If I'd written it, I wouldn't have written lines 5-7. But- I didn't write it. Good job.
| lordelfy chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
wow, freakin awesome. Seems like you have a big vocab; something i dont have! To me, this poem was very thought out and flowed well, great job!