Reviews for Jeremy's Dream
Scribbledydee chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I quite like it so far, with the twang that other reviewers have said about, but I think that the ending to chapter one was quite abrupt and most people would have missed it had it not been for the fact it was a chapter ending. Try to edit it a bit and stretch it out a bit. Apart from that, it's great.
Tatianolishka chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
I love how nicely spaced out it is, it's easy to read. I also love how you stay in character the whole time - Jeremy sounds like a character who I could believe existed :)
LittleDoe chapter 2 . 11/17/2007
I like this! It has a real wetern "twang" to it, and suspensful adventure, too. I like how the story falls together with problem and conflict, friend and enemies. Please continue!

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