Actually got it! Cool story!

This story is just all over the place. I lost the story like three chapters ago. Can you tell me what the hell is happening?

Oh god I love chase!

Your an amzing different writer and this story has a nice plot even a bit confusing. Good story :)

like the story but its kind hard to follow, its a little all over the place

I feel totally cheated! :) I love it and I sorta wanted for Jacey to end up with a changed Tyler or something. But I havent read the sequal yet so I will be back!...just in the sequal book though... :) Very very very good work here and I LOVE Jay, she's like the funny girl Ive always wanted to be! :)

I love it no matter who she picks (as long as its not Keagan):D

Some typos in this one, like wierd instead of weird and steriotype instead of stereotype. I'd like to see where it's going though Like it so far.

And here you switched from Romy to Remy I believe

Hmm, in the first few chapters, she lives in Sacramento and now she said she hated San Fransisco? Aren't you confusing two cities now? :p

Ive fallen inlove w. your fic! i read the sequel and everything but i definitely like this one more and the lemon scene was so well written!

I can't wait to read the sequel. Jay and Chase should be together.

When I read your first chapter, I thought your story was okay. Second chapter was alright too, but as it went on, I found it really hard to read. I don't intend to bash on your story, or be mean or anything, but it seemed too "Quizilla"-like. How Jacey is always talking to herself, everything always works out so that Jacey gets the boy (Tyler) right away.

I kept reading though, and when Remy and Kegan came in, it got really hard to read. Mainly because Jacey seemed really off. Her personality didn't seem to fit her character. She was TOO outspoken, always clinging on guys. (i.e., she was sleeping with Kegan, calling him Pookie, etc.) It just doesn't flow, like when she says she doesn't have any experience with boys. Because that wasn't true at all.

I'm not saying that your story sucks or anything, but it's probably that it's not my taste. It was a bit too unrealistic. And I'm not saying I could do a better job. Because honestly, I don't think I could. I think it's just me, because it seems that plenty of other people love your story. But as for me, I couldn't get past chapter 10.

damn he is gay..

well actuli its better that he is.

I must admit I actually guessed that.. and he likes her right?

but as for the chase thing.. yeh unguessable... yeh ...

I bit my lip. "How many people have you guys killed?"

Kegan snorted. "Eleven, all together."

was that just a major typo ans just supposed to be Tommy?

By the way, this story is good!