Reviews for Lies Serene
Kusje chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Inspirational, a sense of longing for something that is unknown or something that has been taken/stolen away.

Heartbreaking and numb, it was wonderful :)

The poetry structure is good also. Wonderful collaboration with the lines and rhythm.

The ending line was the sugary icing on this cake of poetry. Very well written.
MirriTandris chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Pretty. I like it _