Reviews for Naked
la luna cara chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Tthis poem is really interesting. It has such a cynical viewpoint on people and society and their perspective on nakedness - "naked" being both a physical and an emotional state. I really like the sequence, how it goes from the romantic proposal to sewage. My favorite part, though, is the line "because naked we were born, but we like to change things". It made me smile.
Evangelizationiscoming chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
I like this poem very much. It flows and has a certain feel to it. Good Job!