Reviews for Sweet Secret
Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Reading this makes me hungry, haha. I really enjoyed the flow of it.
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
cute poem!
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
it's clever and kinda very pretty.

i like it much.
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
sneaky. i like it.
Adrian Brodskiey chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
I like the mentions of candy! It makes my horrible day better.

interesting format. I like it. it could use some grammatical help, but im not picky.

All the way around, I LOVE!
mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
even if you were just hungry writing this, it's a very well-written poem. the repetition of the "whatever-you-wish" brought it into a circle. i love the end. the rest of the poem sounds so innocent and sweet, but the end gives it a little sinister twist. great job

paz,

-the delirious one