|Reviews for Sweet Secret|
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Reading this makes me hungry, haha. I really enjoyed the flow of it.
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
it's clever and kinda very pretty.
i like it much.
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
sneaky. i like it.
| Adrian Brodskiey chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
I like the mentions of candy! It makes my horrible day better.
interesting format. I like it. it could use some grammatical help, but im not picky.
All the way around, I LOVE!
| mindOFdeliriousUNREST chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
even if you were just hungry writing this, it's a very well-written poem. the repetition of the "whatever-you-wish" brought it into a circle. i love the end. the rest of the poem sounds so innocent and sweet, but the end gives it a little sinister twist. great job
-the delirious one