Reviews for Broken Prince
Stormie Greye chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Beautifully written! Very dark, and I love the words you chose to use for description like "obscure castle," "hallow hope," "broken pride," and the alliteration of "wisp of wind a whisper." My favorite part was the ending quote, but especially the last two lines: "For in his death do you gain power / From this throne that sits upon the grave of your father." That really brings it home.
Dawn Gabriel chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
True. Chilling. I liked it.