Reviews for The Beauty Of Spring
NB chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
this one is different, but i think its my favorite
life like whoa chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
As much as I like this and I love the imagry.. part of me wished you would have written more. This is a great begining but it left me wanting more. I like it! You should add on to it.
re x invented chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
sasha, i know it's you and no offence but i really would do just as well without your reviews.

thanks
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I like this a lot. Short and sweet. Its well written and the imagery is lovely. My only suggestion is that you work on the length and wording of the second line because it seems a bit awkward when its read with the rest of the poem. Great job and keep writing!