|Reviews for Where Did I Go?|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
positive: The celler feels both pastoral and fantastical, a nice combination. I like the lines "Spiderweb kingdoms reign here,/and the peasants,the flies/-do not seek an audience with the nobles," and "from sun to cellar.".
negative: The second line, "down to the celler,"needs a capital letter. It is, though, then a fragment, and might serve the poem better with a question mark after "...earth." "...of dingy glass jars and lordly spiders" needs a period. Remember in the last stanza that you only need to capitalize words at the beginninng of sentences, not the beginning of each line. In that stanza you do neither consistently.