Good job on the rhyming, but remember to keep the flow in check too. When your whole poem is in couplets like this, it's strange to have some lines twice the length of the previous.

Keep writing!

I like how the narrator seems to be telling off all the players of the world... it has attitude )

It's nice that you're having the poem rhyme, but in some spots it loses the flow (i.e. By this time, it is always too late,/Because you already got so much more than just an innocent date.)

Try reading the poem to yourself, and adjusting the lines so that they flow as you speak it. If it seems strage to say aloud, you know you might have a bit of editing to do. The rhyming won't seem as forced, either.

Good job! Keep on writing!

i really enjoyed it. it reminded me of some guys i knew... dudes can be hurtfull. i'm getting over one now