|Reviews for A Softer Sin|
| Fobbster chapter 4 . 6/4/2016
Poor Jared... This relationship is so unhealthy I S2g. Jared is like an abused puppy.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/18/2015
Wish this wasn't an unfinished piece. A great story.
| JilianLo chapter 7 . 6/18/2014
Hey, I commented on your livejournal page a few months back asking to be added as a friend so I could read your stories and I noticed a lot of other people wanted to be added as well but have not been in the past year; so I'm guessing you quit livejournal? If not, please help...?
| ladyfortune chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Just started reading and I am so intrigued. Great work!
| Tinted Windows chapter 5 . 1/25/2012
I LIKE IT :D and i read your whole rant :D much to my amusement XD almost better than the story itself xD :') hehe, anyway just to say I like your work and yes Cody is an arse... but I likes him xD xXx
| jessicas favorite stories chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
i dont have a livejurnal. ca you email me the rest? i need to know how it ends 0_0
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
. .ever! But having said that I totally get where you're coming from! I'm the type of person that also tries to cram everything into my brain at once and I get angry if I can't, then I stress and ending up making
myself sick, high five! Anyway :) so yeah totally loving what I've read so far, but obviously I stopped to read your amazingly long and hilarious rant :') and haven't gotten any further. Yet. Lisa
| anushca chapter 6 . 6/30/2011
Oh, I was over the moon tinking you just wrote another chapter! :-( I will truly like to see this story finished some day, but I saw in your LJ that that's unlikely to happended. It's a loss. I really liked this one.
Hope to hear more from you.
| charm en route chapter 6 . 5/27/2011
I think this is pretty cool too. :)
You kind of lost me a bit for a while though and I ended up skimming a lot. Haha. For me, it was taking too long to get to the plot and too much Jared time or Cody time. But now that we are at the point I think it'll be cool. :)
| Alex Prosper chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Have to add: I couldn't even start on A Textbook Case yet because I'm still pining after this one. All I can think about is Van and Cody (sobs). :(
| Alex Prosper chapter 6 . 4/30/2011
Damn it! 3 years since your last update! This is why I do not read old unfinished works, but the catchy summary of a promising story line was too good to pass up. The writing, the dialog, the characters, it is all exactly what I was hoping for, hit the right spot. Perfect. Van is superb, intelligent, dangerous, yet surprisingly domestic and polite. Former CIA with a hidden past-love him! and Cody is such a spoiled brat with a vicious streak and a wit to match Van's. They are me new favorite characters.
And now I am depressed. Please don't give up on them!
Please don't leave this unfinished. It doesn't matter if it takes months or years until you continue it, a small reply whether you will continue someday would be enough to make me happy. If you don't plan on updating I can comfortingly give up on this story and not expect anything. I am going to put this in my alerts and hope for your answer!
I do see that you have another really promising story that is completed and will get started immediately on that one.
| Evanescent October chapter 6 . 3/20/2011
I sincerely hope you find the motivation to continue this.
I'm intrigued :)
| Lazuli Shadow chapter 6 . 2/27/2011
You'd better continue this story.
It's so easy to read and the characters are interesting.
| choco addict chapter 6 . 12/29/2010
Hi! I know that you haven't updated this in quite some time but I discovered it yesterday and now I'm IN LOVE with it! Please don't give up on this kick ass story. The plot is awesome, the characters are so well developed and definetely NOT ones that somebody can find easily in a story and your writing is great. Also I have a message for Cody: Van is the man! Please continue this soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
| eternallily chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
Hey, I love your story! It's a lot different from most of the stories on fictionpress. Even though Van is a serial killer, I still like his character. :) I can't wait until the next chapter.