Reviews for Abstracted Existence
TwoGunBob chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Those first few lines set the stage for this piece, conjuring the icy emptiness of truly cosmic isolation. The final line ties it up perfectly, simple yet heartrending in its implication.

Also I just realised that rhymed. Clearly you are that good. ;P
RedBlueWolf chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
This is beautiful! X3. yes,keep up the work!
lovinglyDelphine chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Holy Crap! That was amazing! You are a wonderful writer!
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
I really love this. I think that every word is beautifully picked. Anyway, I will add this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

(TSP)
Nemonus chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
That last line is very clever. You've got good words here, but they don't concrete anything. When I start to understand a scene, the sitting in the very beginning for example, you leave that. It's too abstract. "The top shelf galaxy that never was found." is a delightful phrase. However, any impact the poem might have had is lost in the abstractness.