Reviews for The Tales of Black Knights
Ski Aer chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Wow, if this isn't up and coming talent I don't know what is. The only potential problem is maintaning them all during your tale and deepening them enough while you're doing it to make it worthwhile.
Duany Cherill chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Wow, you have described quite a plethora of characters. I think you have a very good idea of who your characters are and where they fit in the place of your story. I guess the only thing I can suggest for the time being is just to go over your work before you post it. I know it's possible to miss a few mistakes, but I noticed quite a few in your descriptions, and they were beginning to get distracting. Other than that, your story sounds like it could be a really good one!