Reviews for Nightmare Express
AluminumMuse chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Did you really have this dream? Wonderful stroy idea, quite well written. I would only say that the line about it being to quiet to be natural is a bit over used. There are some gramatical errors as well, and you should try to use discriptive words that fit the mood you are trying to set. On a lighter (or darker) note, I love the ending.
Blue Drifter chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
wow, that was kind of sad. Was this really a dream? Er...nightmare? This would make an awesome story. Great detail.